when i say
you say no
when i say
you say no
why the yes is lost
amid this no
why the no is there
when nothing's said
let me say
before you say
let me feel
before you go away
the world is mute
still you say no
the world is mute
still you say no
when i say
when i say
--Anwar Khan
the third stanza appeals to me.........other stanzas r ok.........
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ReplyDeletewhy the yes is lost amid this no..
u can go deeper with such sentiments..
make it more dark.
its open for interpretation pragu you find the deeper meaning in it it is your perspective and i appreciate but it remains the way it is :)
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